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Post by lorna on Jun 2, 2013 7:57:21 GMT -1
This is poem is an address to the city of Preston written in the voice of Belisama, the goddess of the river Ribble and its vale, which won the Preston Guild Poetry Competition in 2012 and steered me in the direction of becoming a Bard.
Proud of Preston
Belisama:
Proud of Preston heed my entry Hear the call of ancient memories Hearts purloined by Roman sentries Like a river shining bright.
Proud of Preston born free traders Made by commerce and hard labour Merchants gilded artists favored Like the Brigantes warred in tribes.
Mechanics shift the scene of battle Raise the red brick smog industrial Cording hearts like twisting material On the wheels of the cotton lords.
Step the Chartists to the engines Pull the plugs release the tension The rioters face the sentries Dye the river dark with blood.
Grey arise the business faceless Fake fulfillment for the faithless Mass the market for the tasteless Selling life for capital.
High in the stone fortress The sentries hold their rule Beyond the mall and office Do you hear a river call?
Proud of Preston I have carved you In my sweeping spirit formed you Through your veins floods dazzling water My Setantii shining bright.
Will you hearken to my entry Drown false dreams in ancient memories Will the proud of Preston Like a shining river rise?
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Post by potia on Jun 2, 2013 14:35:30 GMT -1
That's powerful. I don't know Preston at all but I feel I get a sense of it through this. A city similar in many ways to Glasgow. Thanks for sharing.
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Post by Chad on Jun 2, 2013 15:04:17 GMT -1
I especially like the fifth stanza. It describes the United States as a whole. Excuse my moment! Anyway, great poem! I can see why this won the competition.
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