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Post by sonofrobinswood on Nov 16, 2007 15:08:30 GMT -1
To feel and see, What I feel and see. You do not have to become me. To feel and see, What I feel and see. Just sit beside an old Oak tree, And BE.
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Post by arth_frown on Nov 16, 2007 17:09:54 GMT -1
lovely!
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Post by Craig on Nov 20, 2007 10:43:06 GMT -1
Short poems are so much harder than rambling epics - well done.
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Post by woodsmoke on Nov 24, 2007 14:52:51 GMT -1
This is an allitaritive and assonant triumph!! You and Arth have inspired me to have a go at something short - I'm one of life's ramblers, and Craig is right, there's so much skill in something like this. Nice one.
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