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Post by arth_frown on Nov 20, 2007 11:08:49 GMT -1
last one from me hopefully in the next 35 years I'll write two more.
Being a outdoor person I come up with this.
The trees are the pillars that hold up the sky roof of my church
The floor is a mosaic of leaves
The choir is the song of the birds
The rain my pagan baptism
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Post by Craig on Nov 20, 2007 11:20:09 GMT -1
Again, simple is hard, and again you've done it  Remind me to send you an image I have of a Tree Cathedral... |
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Post by arth_frown on Nov 20, 2007 11:24:51 GMT -1
Thanks Craig, wiil do.
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Post by littleraven on Nov 20, 2007 11:32:31 GMT -1
Arth, I think you may well have a talent for liturgy, those pieces of prose that are used for specific intent.
99% of poetry that people put out in the name of 'bardic tradition' is nothing short of crap. These are completely the other end of the scale.
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Post by Craig on Nov 20, 2007 11:35:09 GMT -1
99% of poetry that people put out in the name of 'bardic tradition' is nothing short of crap. These are completely the other end of the scale. Cheers LR  |
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Post by littleraven on Nov 20, 2007 11:40:59 GMT -1
99% of poetry that people put out in the name of 'bardic tradition' is nothing short of crap. These are completely the other end of the scale. Cheers LR Hmm, yes, which end of the scale would you be, might have to think on that ... <whap> |
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Post by arth_frown on Nov 20, 2007 11:59:07 GMT -1
Thank you.
I find it hard to put into words how I see things, poetry and photography is a good medium to express that
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Post by Craig on Nov 20, 2007 12:36:38 GMT -1
Hmm, yes, which end of the scale would you be, might have to think on that ... <whap> I wasn't thinking of me. I'm presently trying to encourage more people, especially nervous beginners to post their poetry here, and you come out with '99% is crap!'... thanks! |
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Post by coedwen on Nov 20, 2007 13:00:52 GMT -1
Loving your words Arthfrown! I've printed it off at the library. I didn't know how to so asked the lady on the desk and she thought they were beautiful too even the pagan baptism bit!!!
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Post by arth_frown on Nov 20, 2007 13:13:36 GMT -1
Loving your words Arthfrown! I've printed it off at the library. I didn't know how to so asked the lady on the desk and she thought they were beautiful too even the pagan baptism bit!!! thanks, I'm glad you and the librarian like it. |
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Post by littleraven on Nov 20, 2007 16:15:38 GMT -1
Hmm, yes, which end of the scale would you be, might have to think on that ... <whap> I wasn't thinking of me. I'm presently trying to encourage more people, especially nervous beginners to post their poetry here, and you come out with '99% is crap!'... thanks! LOL I take your point. It's just that I don't associate the people here with that 99% so I didn't think. My bad. |
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Post by woodsmoke on Nov 24, 2007 14:48:23 GMT -1
Your poems are just like you. Very wise, saying just what needs to be said without being showy about it. I like this one very much (as I have probably said before). Do we really have to wait another 35 years for the next one?!
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Post by arth_frown on Nov 26, 2007 11:03:39 GMT -1
Your poems are just like you. Very wise, saying just what needs to be said without being showy about it. I like this one very much (as I have probably said before). Do we really have to wait another 35 years for the next one?! Thanks Suzy I like to write a poem about a Robin that follows me around the woods while I'm working, not sure what to write. |
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